Teaching Writing:  Inspiration in a Remedial Writing Lab


Successfully teaching writing to struggling learners is a serious commission.

While conventional teaching strategies succeed in training most students to achieve average and advanced writing proficiencies, they do not address the one issue that all underachievers have in common.

They are reluctant to participate in activities and tasks due to their lack of confidence.

Here is how one high-school English Language Arts teacher met that challenge. 

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Engagement Strategy

It was the last period of the day when I entered the writing lab, and to say that the thirty-two sophomores slumped in desks and computer chairs looked bored would be an understatement. 

Images of Salvadore Dali’s melting watch paintings drifted through my mind as I scanned the room.

The writing teacher began class with a set of callbacks: 

Teacher: How do we create characters?
Students: We use proper nouns. 
Teacher: How do we create settings? 
Students: We use proper nouns

These sing-song callbacks continued--using the same two questions and answers--for about five minutes (It felt like five hours.). Then the students were told to pass their homework assignments to the front of the class.

The teacher shuffled the papers and read each one, stopping occasionally to call on random students to make comments or to ask questions.

You must be saying to yourself, “What’s so spectacular about this lesson? Nothing has impressed me so far.” 

Fair enough.

Data-Driven Practices

What made this lesson so remarkable was the quality of the writing.

The first opening line was Mick Savage sprinted to the entrance of the Centennial Middle School, but the door was already locked. 

Immediately, my curiosity was peaked and I began to formulate questions: Why was Mick sprinting? Was he late for school…again? Was he going to a dance but arrived just minutes after administrators had locked the doors?

Maybe he was a starter for the basketball team and would soon be banging desperately on the door because the game was about to begin.  Maybe he was just hoping to grab the door as it was closing so he didn’t have to wait to be buzzed in.  

As each paper was read, I noted that the characters were interesting, the plots were believable, and the conflicts were riveting.  When the bell rang, I couldn’t wait to ask the teacher what his secret was for getting such impressive narratives from such a disaffected group.

He told me, “A number of studies have shown that it takes 20 repetitions to transfer information into short-term memory and 40 repetitions to transfer information into long-term memory. I share this information with my students so that they understand the purpose of the callbacks. 

Then, I randomly select students to respond to the writings in order to get students to think like state judges – the ones who will be scoring their drafts at the end of the year.  Students catch on quickly with this method, but it’s not until they see their own writings (and grades) improve, that they’re really convinced.” 

If I didn’t hear the writings myself, I would never have believed this strategy could have produced such extraordinary results. 

Here is an introductory lesson that will get students started writing thought-provoking stories.

Lesson Idea

Step 1: Ask students to brainstorm colorful character names and places from text and film like J.K. Rowling’s Draco Malfoy/Slytherin or Suzanne Collins’ Effie Trinket/District 12. 

Here is a link to a five-minute, teaching writing podcast that explains how to help students design colorful characters.

Step 2: Tell students to select one name and one setting from the lists below (These words will become springboards for their narratives.), and have them write for ten minutes.

Step 3: Have volunteers share their stories, stopping from time to time to ask random students to recall parts of the story they found most memorable.

Note: If you absolutely hate the prewriting part of writing, here’s the secret for blowing right past it and diving straight into the drafting part: just make up great character names, drop them into believable settings, and the story will practically write itself! 

Throw in an unexpected time (8:23 instead of 8:00) along with any color at all and no judge (even a hard-to-please one) will ever know. 

Add callback sessions along with random critiquing to this exercise, and see if you experience similar results.

Free Materials

Here is a free lesson and interactive handout that you can use several times during the year when teaching writing to help students understand the importance of using specific rather than general words in their writings. 

Conclusion/Share Point

Now, here’s a question for you. 

What is one easy writing strategy that you use to spice up your own writing or one strategy your students use to add interest to their writings? 

Until next time…stay committed…teach with passion…and inspire students with who you are.

About the Author of Teaching Writing

Janice Malone is a teacher, seminar leader, and owner of ELA Seminars. For more of her story, visit her website at http://www.elaseminars.com/and check out over 100 free lessons she has posted on Pinterest

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